The article describing the rose tree deserves 10 points, but looking back at the topic, people suddenly see ‘wrong wrong’
March 21, 2022 07:08 GMT+7
The question asked to describe a shade tree, but this student chose the “main character” as a rose tree.
Writing practice is an indispensable subject for primary school students, not only helping them practice their ability to use the Vietnamese language but also improving their creativity and imagination. However, because of their young age, many primary school students’ essays fall into a state of off-topic, asking one thing, students answering another, causing teachers and readers to just “say hello”.
Recently, on social networks, there was an article describing a small rose tree that made people laugh. Although the voice is very smooth and detailed, looking at the topic, the reader suddenly discovers something “wrong”.
Specifically, the article is presented as follows: “Of all the shade trees, my favorite is the rose in my yard. The tree blooms with beautiful red flowers, smells good and protects the ants from the sun. I promise to take good care of the rose tree.”
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| Descriptive essay on rose tree |
Under the observation of this little friend, the rose tree clearly shows up from its color, fragrance, to the use of “shading the ants from the sun”. At the end of the article, this author also affirms that he will take good care of this plant.
After reading this article, everyone praised it for its elaborate, smooth writing and careful and careful observation. However, netizens also “fired” to realize that the author had digressed, while the topic asked to “describe the shade tree”, this child chose the flower to describe.
In fact, the story of digression when writing is an eternal story of many students. I don’t know how many points will be given to this essay describing the rose tree, but if it doesn’t make a mistake, it also deserves a high score.
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