The essay describing the buffalo was scored with 0 points, reading the teacher’s comment is really too much!
Writing practice is a subject that promotes students’ rich imagination and language ability. However, there are many children who have humorous descriptions, sometimes even unrealistic, so they have produced bad writings, bad laughs.
For example, recently on social networks, there was a video sharing the writing exercise of a 6th grade student with the topic “Describe an animal you love”. The boy described the buffalo but did not look like a buffalo at all, with many absurd details.
Perhaps that’s why the teacher gave this article 0 points with comments and affirmations: “I dare say I have never seen a buffalo in real life.”
The essay describes a special buffalo but it immediately ate 0 points, the teacher only commented 1 sentence but it was so true
Specifically, students describe the following: “My family has a buffalo, it’s so cute. It’s more than 1 month old and it’s cute. It’s also very big, about 7 pounds already. Every day mom likes to chain it to a chair. It just keeps going. often ask for food, cry a little, on its head there is a flower that looks very pretty.
Its eyes are very bright, its face is round. Seeing me come home from school, he kept jumping on my back. I usually sleep with it. I love my buffalo very much because it is my pet.”
After reading the text, everyone immediately understood why the teacher gave 0 points heavily. Because in fact, this student did not describe anything correctly.
What buffalo has only 7 pounds, even so, it is chained to a chair. The most absurd detail must be that every time he comes home from school, the buffalo jumps on the boy’s body, while the baby buffalo in real life is already very heavy. Many people guessed that perhaps the boy had never seen a buffalo in real life, so he randomly took a cat or a dog to describe it.
The article is full of misspellings, and if it’s not true, it deserves to “eat” 0 points, right! Practicing writing is never an easy subject for students, not to mention there are times when teachers are asked to describe things they have never seen before. In these cases, the boys and girls can ask their parents to turn on the video to observe, or listen to the experiences of their family members.
The buffalo in real life is so big!
Source: Minhphucmientrung
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